Wednesday, June 11, 2008

Still(For Laura) Comments

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The shutter’s click
gathers the sunlight

softly sifting it
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Dónall Dempsey
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Colin J... 11 June 2008

your image sleeps curled up inside the camera Beautiful... Colin J...

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Greenwolfe 1962 11 June 2008

You do write about beauty. That's the merit in what you do. Its probably the only true merit that poetry has. I still don't like the line breaks. Greenwolfe 1962

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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