Stones Falling Poem by Damsel Mystique

Stones Falling

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Stones are falling from my soul?
like digesting diamonds
...so hard
everytime you leave
I get the same dying feeling
you are like the freshest air
that im humbly breathing
you make me FEEL ALIVE
in a perception so cold
a razor to fragility
nothingness well known by me
Stones are falling from my soul?

12/16-18/05

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seán O' Muiriosa 08 January 2006

Powerful and convincing poem. Really liked it. ' Stones are falling from my soul...' wonderful line.

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Mary Nagy 20 December 2005

Great poem Damsel! I look forward to reading more of your poems. sincerely, Mary

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Damsel Mystique

Damsel Mystique

Salisbury, NC
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