Stop Breath Poem by Nathalie Petersson

Stop Breath



Stop breath,
Stop feel.
Emotional who never make sence.
Thought I remember from yesterday.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Livi Topley 05 August 2008

Its great and I'm not just saying that. Through out there is this idea of everything stopping and a greater sense of emotion that just doesnt make sense, but still all the attention is brought to it. And the end line brings everything together. Really good job!

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