This Battle Is End Poem by Nathalie Petersson

This Battle Is End

Rating: 5.0


This battle is end.
No more fears.
You are too far away,
can't see any tears.

This battle is end
You can never hit me again.
I was too afraid,
try to escape.

This battle is end.
You are playing a game.
I try to hide,

I WAS ONLY A CHILD!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colin Jeffery 10 December 2008

This is a good poem.

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Blue Eyes 27 December 2008

i like this poem though it is so short, but its well written.

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Ency Bearis 13 December 2008

determination is the key..so you have the guts to end the battle..great theme.. nice provoking poem..10 (You may read my poem ' Determination ' to know what is all about) Ency Bearis

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 12 December 2008

time helps us, wait is the key 10

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Jools E. 11 December 2008

Hi Nathalie! Nice little poem you wrote. If the topic wasn't so sad, I'd say it' s really cute. But really well done. Best wishes

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Darren Harris 10 December 2008

i find your poem to be very saddening, but a great poem, best wishes daz

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