Monday, March 9, 2009

Storms Of Fear. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bent trees are a proof of persistent storms
Which batter against many defences
Incessantly blowing off-course, warning
No-one ahead. Gales, determined to drench
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Kris Smith 09 March 2009

Strong write this Fay a lot between the lines so well put together 10 +++ Chris

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James Roberts 09 March 2009

Very good thought provoking poem I've just read itr through 5x and will go back and read it again jim

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love stands unafraid..lovely write..a lovely comparison to nature...swing back folks

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Catrina Heart 09 March 2009

symbolic piece written with great metaphors..meaningful poem...10+++++

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Fiona Davidson 09 March 2009

It certainly does Fay...great write giving much to think about...thanks...Fi 10+++

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