Story Of First Night Once Upon A Time Poem by Saravanan Sivasubramanian

Story Of First Night Once Upon A Time



Fifty years ago
a beautiful young woman
entered to first night room

As per her mother's advice
she knelt down
on the feet of her husband

She was under his knees
Until He lifting her

Her husband not lifting her

He found out
Heaven on earth by her obedience

Hey! pretty girl
You may stand
he whispering



because of
fear and shame
she is in confusing state

now the husband
got angry
and said that
o! girl you must stand
in a dominating tone

now itself husband
enjoys
Heaven on earth by her obedience

At last the husband
Came to a conclusion
He is behave as active partner
He made her as passive partner

He switch off the light
After that the darkness
Only knows the happenings

He feels and enjoys the heaven on earth
He shows the heaven on earth to her

Story Of  First Night Once Upon A Time
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This poem is in a form of story. It describes about first night of couples 50 years back.
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