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Farmer's Voice

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In our villages -
The paddy fields are greenary
The sky is bluish
Our life only faded

© Saravanan siva

Farmer's Voice
Wednesday, June 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: farmers
Kumarmani Mahakul 21 June 2017

A great poem with deep meaning. The most important line is.. Our life only faded. Peddy fields are green, sky is blue, dawn and dusk are beautiful but the life style of farmers are...? Dear Saravanan, you have so wisely and briefly depicted this. Thanks for sharing....10

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Thanks sir, for giving such a nice words for my poem

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Rini Shibu 29 November 2017

Great message, life became meaningless in this colourful world

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Chinedu Dike 29 August 2017

Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. A powerful message in a well encapsulated piece of poetry nicely brought forth with insight. Thanks for sharing Saravanan.

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Siva. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Bharati Nayak 27 June 2017

In our villages - The paddy fields are greenary The sky is bluish Our life only faded - - - - - -Short and meaningful poem.The farmers who provide food to all live in poverty in India.A great poem written with empathy.

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The four liner poem has a great amount of meaning. The blue sky, the green paddy fields look so beautiful but of what avail? The saddest part is that the farmers in India are so poor that they are unable to make both ends meet. Saravanan, this is a fine poem and fine photograph too. Well done!

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thank u madam for your nice words which encourage me a lot

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