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Farmer's Voice - Poem by Saravanan Siva

In our villages -
The paddy fields are greenary
The sky is bluish
Our life only faded



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Topic(s) of this poem: farmers

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Farmer's Voice by Saravanan Siva

  • Rini ShibuRini Shibu (11/29/2017 6:50:00 AM)

    Great message, life became meaningless in this colourful world (Report)Reply

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (8/29/2017 2:55:00 PM)

    Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. A powerful message in a well encapsulated piece of poetry nicely brought forth with insight. Thanks for sharing Saravanan. (Report)Reply

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  • Jazib KamalviJazib Kamalvi (8/23/2017 6:04:00 AM)

    A nice poetic imagination, Siva. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks (Report)Reply

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  • Bharati NayakBharati Nayak (6/27/2017 2:19:00 AM)

    In our villages -
    The paddy fields are greenary
    The sky is bluish
    Our life only faded
    - - - - - -Short and meaningful poem.The farmers who provide food to all live in poverty in India.A great poem written with empathy.
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  • Geeta Radhakrishna MenonGeeta Radhakrishna Menon (6/26/2017 11:53:00 AM)

    The four liner poem has a great amount of meaning.
    The blue sky, the green paddy fields look so beautiful but of what avail?
    The saddest part is that the farmers in India are so poor that they are unable to make both ends meet.
    Saravanan, this is a fine poem and fine photograph too. Well done!
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    Saravanan SivasubramanianSaravanan Sivasubramanian(6/26/2017 11:35:00 PM)

    thank u madam for your nice words which encourage me a lot

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (6/21/2017 3:35:00 PM)

    A great poem with deep meaning. The most important line is.. Our life only faded. Peddy fields are green, sky is blue, dawn and dusk are beautiful but the life style of farmers are...? Dear Saravanan, you have so wisely and briefly depicted this. Thanks for sharing....10 (Report)Reply

    Saravanan SivasubramanianSaravanan Sivasubramanian(6/21/2017 10:22:00 PM)

    Thanks sir, for giving such a nice words for my poem

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 21, 2017

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 21, 2017


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