You rescued me from my distress,
Found me abandoned, left alone in a mess.
I was deeply depressed,
Locked up inside surrounded by darkness.
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Hello Tina, I am sure this poem of yours will be universally felt around the world by all victims of the forbidden feeling of suicide we have to deal with in one way or another. Excellent expression, no crit to offer. 10 from Tai, Thanking you for expressing my darkest fears and feelings for the people I love.
I really like that you took time to write about something like this. It shows a very caring side that I am sure many many people appreciate. Many times I have been in that situation and would love to hear words like that. It's a very appreciating poem.