Sunday, April 16, 2017

Stranded In The Universe Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am stranded in the universe
my dreams became a wretched curse
I heard that space and time can never end
I have to say I tried
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 18 April 2017

A heart-touching write on loneliness. An overwhelming sense of doom often assails the lonely heart. Universe is mostly indifferent. Man cannot solve the mystery of the designs that this universe has for each one of us.10

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Barry Middleton 18 April 2017

So I sing my songs of things I cannot know. Thanks Nosheen.

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Rajnish Manga 16 April 2017

Nicely crafted poem probing a man's lonely existence in this vast and limitless universe. It also seeks to know the ultimate destination of this life's journey and what happens in the after-life. Thanks. the plan it seems is very very strange to dance in space where lonely spirits go

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Barry Middleton 16 April 2017

Thank you for commenting. I do wish we could really know that ultimate destination.

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