Strange Relationship Poem by Nikhila Churia

Strange Relationship

Rating: 5.0


There are no words left to say;
How broken and torn my heart is;
Life seems to just fade away;
Leaving my mind lonely and cold.

As I held the hands of the night;
I heard my restless soul cry;
I felt a drop of tear within;
My already wet eyes;
The clock of life ticks fast;
Making memories fade away;
And the world would never stop;
Mocking at me in awfully pathetic ways.

I wish, Oh Lord;
Life was an easier riddle to solve;
As the night closes down, I feel;
An achingly calm stir in mind.

My life is complete;
For passersby;
They say aloud;
'Oh, you have it all';
But I keep searching;
Here and there;
For what I miss;
The most in life.

There is no name;
For what we share;
It's not friendship;
It's not love.

What is it that still connects;
You and me on both the ends;
It's hard to define;
This feeling, strange;
A mixture of confusion and dismay;
All I know is;
Oh my dear;
We share a strange relationship.

Wednesday, November 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,love and loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 18 November 2018

i plan to include your poem in my upcoming December 2018 showcase (of poems from PH) . any questions? just ask! ! bri (:

0 0 Reply
Nikhila Churia 18 November 2018

Thanks a lot Sir! ! I feel honored that my poem has been selected.

0 0
Bri Edwards 18 October 2018

a fascinating poem about a strange relationship, imagined or real (for YOU) ? ? i'd like to know why you place semi-colons at the end of each line, except the last of each stanza. hmm? otherwise i applaud your grammar and poetic execution [not death execution! ]. to MyPoemList. bri :)

0 0 Reply
Nikhila Churia 18 November 2018

Thanks a lot Sir for your kind words! ! ! For me its real, precisely speaking was... I use semicolon as a breathe pause and honestly speaking I never gave much thought to whether it was correct to use at the end of every sentence. :) shall definitely try to correct the error next time. Thanks for pointing it out.

0 0
Saadat Tahir 12 February 2017

As I held the hands of the night; I heard my restless soul cry; touching and disturbing... a poem that clings to the mind and conveys the feelings eminantly liked

1 0 Reply
Nikhila Churia 12 February 2017

Thank you! ! ! ! :)

0 0
Siddartha Montik 04 December 2016

perfect Poem to narrate a Dismay. WOnderfully written with such flow of meaning. Thank you for sharing Poet! 10+++

2 0 Reply
Nikhila Churia 26 February 2017

Thanks a lot poet! ! :)

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success