There are no words left to say;
How broken and torn my heart is;
Life seems to just fade away;
Leaving my mind lonely and cold.
As I held the hands of the night;
I heard my restless soul cry;
I felt a drop of tear within;
My already wet eyes;
The clock of life ticks fast;
Making memories fade away;
And the world would never stop;
Mocking at me in awfully pathetic ways.
I wish, Oh Lord;
Life was an easier riddle to solve;
As the night closes down, I feel;
An achingly calm stir in mind.
My life is complete;
For passersby;
They say aloud;
'Oh, you have it all';
But I keep searching;
Here and there;
For what I miss;
The most in life.
There is no name;
For what we share;
It's not friendship;
It's not love.
What is it that still connects;
You and me on both the ends;
It's hard to define;
This feeling, strange;
A mixture of confusion and dismay;
All I know is;
Oh my dear;
We share a strange relationship.
a fascinating poem about a strange relationship, imagined or real (for YOU) ? ? i'd like to know why you place semi-colons at the end of each line, except the last of each stanza. hmm? otherwise i applaud your grammar and poetic execution [not death execution! ]. to MyPoemList. bri :)
Thanks a lot Sir for your kind words! ! ! For me its real, precisely speaking was... I use semicolon as a breathe pause and honestly speaking I never gave much thought to whether it was correct to use at the end of every sentence. :) shall definitely try to correct the error next time. Thanks for pointing it out.
As I held the hands of the night; I heard my restless soul cry; touching and disturbing... a poem that clings to the mind and conveys the feelings eminantly liked
perfect Poem to narrate a Dismay. WOnderfully written with such flow of meaning. Thank you for sharing Poet! 10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i plan to include your poem in my upcoming December 2018 showcase (of poems from PH) . any questions? just ask! ! bri (:
Thanks a lot Sir! ! I feel honored that my poem has been selected.