Friday, June 29, 2007

Stranger On The Shore Comments

Rating: 5.0

You stand near the sand dunes,
a stranger on the shore.
You stand there in black,
colours widows wore,
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David Harris
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JoAnn McGrath 30 June 2007

A beautifully saddened piece on the lose of a dear one and time for rejoining the two........... If I didn't read on and stopped before the loss.....I could have put myself into your picture...being the one standing there looking out over the sea....only mourning the loss of once was and never will be.....My little retreat from it all is a little beach on lake Erie that I visit.....I've spent many hours just staring out over the water......wondering....?

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Marci Made 30 June 2007

Hauntingly sad but beautifull just the same...........marci. :)

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 29 June 2007

To pine away for a lover taken away... Beautiful write david..10

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