..Stranger's Reflection Poem by Lorena Lalen Cruz

..Stranger's Reflection

Rating: 4.0


In the mirror
I looked at my reflection
I was shoked in horror
It's a girl of complication

A stranger she is
A known face, lament personality
Changed qualities
A face full of atrocity

Perfections are visible
Imperfections are hidden
None is capable
To sight her inner burden

But I see her through her disguise
No vacancy for happiness
Only those helpless sighs
To cover her moroseness

Realization knocked on me
A heartless clarification
I own the face of vanity
The stranger's chaotic reflection

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nashy Lamen 23 September 2009

Most Powerful line... it created an impact on me.. 'I own the face of vanity'... BEAUTIFUL!

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Julia Pascual 18 September 2009

you think so negative of yourself... thing lightly next time... =)

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Waqas Naeem 16 September 2009

'I own the face of vanity' well written! ! I loved it to the core... cheers..

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