How Dare You Poem by Lorena Lalen Cruz

How Dare You



How dare you
Make me fall
If you wouldn't
Catch me at all

Don't you know
How painful it is
To fall for someone
Who would make a miss

Maybe this is just
A game for you
And everything
Is just not true

So I'll tell you
This one last thing
I'll find someone
and I'll be his everything

He'll treat me well
A prince he'll be
And you'll be alone
Coz you abandoned me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 22 July 2009

nice rational poem, keep writing..........

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Nashy Lamen 10 July 2009

I like the concept of the poem.. Very sad.. Very bitter.. Keep it up.. c:

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Danzen D. 28 June 2009

Bitterness and anger flow bonded at the same time, woven with the threads of your style. Nice write. Keep writing!

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Christina Phan 28 June 2009

great poem i can relate to this is so painful n hurt so much its so much emotion n angry 10+

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