Thursday, January 15, 2009

Strawberry Hill Comments

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On a hill of endless jade
Red strawberries dotted the swathe of green
I hurried to sate my bulging wicker
When you surprised me with a nudge
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Eddie Roa
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Merna Ibrahim 28 January 2009

I like the poem so much and the strawberry as well.Well written... Merna

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Eddie Roa 16 January 2009

Red strawberries served on a jade plate will be terrific.

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Joseph Poewhit 15 January 2009

Strawberries are good for food, jade isn't

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Eddie Roa

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Manila. Philippines
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