Stray Thoughts Poem by ritty patnaik

Stray Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


unseen,
behind the screen
a world drama
enacted by strange strangers
of world galeria.
seeing the truth
shrouded in the veil
of disbelief,
or fear of the unknown.....

a life time ebbs,
the middleage smiles
crossing the border,
as the youth is spinning
youthful yarns of
a happy tomorrow.
it is the way of the world
to move on,
make space
for the others.

so we got our present,
in a moment it will be past,
immediately after birth,
so why worry, just face it..

life is but
of multifull present situations,
in a moment gets pushed back
to a seemingly,
good or bad past.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 14 December 2009

I think it was Albert Camus who had said that life presents us with situations, the CHOICES we make are - OUR OWN! He was the father of the Philosophy of Existentialism! Truly life presents us with many possibilities! A GOOD POEM,10! -Raj

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Ejaz Khan 01 December 2009

Yeah, you're right ritty, this all past, present and future is nothing more than an illusion, and yet there's a need to learn our lessons in this classroom, called world and from teacher, called time! 10 Regards

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