Stress Not Needed Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Stress Not Needed

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I found him to be restless
There were worry lines on face
He wanted to tell me something
I leaned but heard nothing

He could speak nothing in real
As his speech had tight seal
Teeth were making steel grip
Only eyes could stare or peep

You have anytime chance of seeing a person
You may have many thoughts without any reason
You may know the real helplessness
The death worry can easily be traced

We were close associate
He had worked very hard lately
He had large family to support
He maintained good rapport

He struggled for whole life
Even though it did not prove like edge of knife
He could amass good amount
But in process invited his death counts

Some illness brought him to knees
He was now not free
He had to worry about future
This made him worry more and fear

The end came so soon
He could not speak more in that noon
He breathed his last in my presence
I was near by his bed by chance

So much stress is also not needed
Some advices must be heeded
Health should not be compromised
Good opportunities also should not be missed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 September 2013

I found him to be restless There were worry lines on face

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 September 2013

I found him to be restless There were worry lines on face

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 September 2013

Anneliese Case29 minutes ago I know someone who fits this description. I agree with your analysis that so much stress is not needed. This person's story tells us about our need to connect in and help others in distress.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 September 2013

nice Jyoti Rawat3 hours ago I like to read it nice poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 September 2013

'stiltskin Sage words as ever...I enjoy your style... :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 September 2013

Lovely heart felt poem Susan Harris26 minutes ago True life heartfelt, expressive and life meaning Comment 0 Calculating vanity

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 September 2013

Ronald Duffie26 minutes ago I am very inspired when I read and understand that life is more superior than any other thing that exists around us. Thank you very much for sharing this poem, job well done!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 September 2013

from what i get this about the death of someone who worked hard for his family but disregarded his health in the process Megan Rose28 minutes ago I love it if what I am getting from it some was a little hard to understand but that was just for me but I believe it gets your point across wonderfully Comment +1 Deep chord struck

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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