Strings Of Love Poem by Anisha Das

Strings Of Love

Rating: 5.0


A small fine cut, and a dropp of tear,
Your faint, weak wail, brings her so near.
When the veil of darkness, falls on your eyes,
And you can hear your heart's deepest fears and cries,
She comes in with steps featherly light,
To give you the touch of love and hopes so bright.
A crowded place, yet so lonely,
But her sudden appearance,
Turns an deserted park so homely.
Before her last breath, she blesses you,
With eternal happiness, and success.
She leaves your life as a warm dropp of tear,
But even after years you can feel her around you,
Her love, her blessings so, so near.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catastrophe King 27 September 2006

This beautiful ode on LOVE is so true and honest.... You have absolutely chiselled the piece with words and imagery which go so well for those emotions. A complete 10 deservedly for that thoughtful moment.

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Scarlett O'Hara 24 September 2006

that was nice. are you indian!

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John Tiong Chunghoo 17 September 2006

her love grows in this heart like a seed that his memory is filled with her so many years later each rustle of a leaf, his call to her

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