Strong Desire For Bond Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Strong Desire For Bond

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I thought of writing
With intention of igniting
The compassion and feeling
For those who need some filling

What nature has to do?
With what I need to prove
What is their relevance?
In our life with essence

Many poet’s write
But does not sight
About goal for tomorrow
And struggle to allow

I feel so much
Express enough of trust
Wants to listen to their woes
And know how life goes

They won’t reveal
But inside chamber clearly feel
That no one can take away their pain
My efforts then go clearly in vain

Yes I am human being and handicap person
With many limitations and seized with reasons
Yet I go out to help people
Remind them of tomorrow’s struggle

“I speak with enthusiasm”
With lots of passion and humanism
I have few words of consolation
But strong desire for bond and strong relation

Tuesday, April 22, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

I thought of writing With intention of igniting

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Connie Yost 22 April 2014

Written with compassion and deep feeling- -a very moving poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

Rosemarie Tan Valmores likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

welcome khushi raaj 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

Nice. KR BALAKRISHNAN12 hours ago Mehtajii...your poems always have a human touch.Keep it up.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

The rythym is perfect. Nicholas Pietrowski12 hours ago very good. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

Good write. John Ravenscroft12 hours ago Be you struck with any handicap, or disability, illiterate or homeless, rich or poor whatever walk of life, no matter what extreme, EVERYONE has something to contribute. Look past the typo errors, and look at the beauty of the poem that's written, but don't look past the disability in someone, it is their characterisation of self, and we are richer for their journey of discovery, and more love to be aware.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

welcome ajamal vankar 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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