Stefanie Fontker

Subjective Destruction - Poem by Stefanie Fontker

Destroy infinity
And rename reality,
To scratch is to caress,
And genocide is true love.
I come back for my words,
To find them scattered.
Your hands are red
With long brewed rage.

Comments about Subjective Destruction by Stefanie Fontker

  • Terence George Craddock (10/15/2011 11:18:00 AM)

    incredibly awesome first stanza, the metaphors concepts intrigue, from infinity destruction, to reality reclassified, to a caress obsessive final solution embraced as genocide true love; humanity is reduced to an individual searching for lost scattered words, diaries of witness, the hands red with 'long brewed rage'.

    so much promise is foretold in your lines, awaiting growth years 10++ Stefanie :)

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  • Patti Masterman (10/10/2011 9:43:00 AM)

    Interesting choice of words, like here, gives things a fresh, novel feeling. (Report)Reply

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  • Dave Walker (10/9/2011 3:10:00 PM)

    Very strong words, with an hint of
    anger, a fantastic mix. Great poem.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 9, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, October 10, 2011

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