Submerged Poem by Lola Sanchez

Submerged

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I submerge myself
surrounded by candles- alight
and I think of you

I submerge myself
drown my thoughts in water
but still I think of you

I submerge myself
float into dreamland
and yet I think of you

I submerge myself
surrounded by candles-
blown out

and think of you in the dark

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lungelo Mbatha 25 June 2007

i think i love this one as well...good stuff, keep on writing, hey! lungelo

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Geoff Warden 29 May 2007

Kinda like this, straight forward yet simple in nature, nicly done

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Lola Sanchez

Lola Sanchez

Pretoria, Gauteng South Africa
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