Submission Poem by Mark Earls

Submission

Rating: 5.0


Swiftshock palm slap, pulsethrob rear,
Deep and savage need fulfilled:
Submission.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 06 November 2006

Very descriptive..so few words... well done!

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Raymond Wright 06 November 2006

Damn! All I have to say is: Damn, great poem. ~Ray

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