Submission Poem by Bree Z Love

Submission

Rating: 5.0


Why did you prolong the truths?
Did you think I'd knock it out of you?
Pin you down, til you whimper in silent renditions!
By a technique of tug of war with your tongue?
Well, I actually thought I could!
So, I did all of those hideous things.
Belted them out of your gut.
Challenged you to say it out loud!
You did not want to submit; still!
In again, I rounded it up.
Power like the Vicious Viking, named Victoria;
Holding you up, my captive to my loin, using the weapon.
Made you purge this time, now humiliated.
Yet, you said, it!
Because, you knew this was your undenying end.
Defeated, in annihilation.
It was no easy submission?

Thursday, November 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 11 December 2017

Holding you up, my captive to my loin, using the weapon. Made you purge this time, now humiliated........it was n o easy submission........ comparisons, difficulties... love emotions, feelings. final submission..... thank you dear poetess. you are great in your writings.. tony

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Binayakumar Mohanty 17 November 2017

Defeated in annhilation It was no easy submission.Thanks for sharing.

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Bree Z Love

Bree Z Love

Chicago, Illinois
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