Messages In The Sky Poem by Bree Z Love

Messages In The Sky

Rating: 5.0


In the midst of the well
walked path; with clarity.
I seek to know you well
through a field of serenity.
While others trample over your hidden secrets.
I am determined to find your sequence.

Among the gracious leaves fall.
We nearly missed your beauty.
In the midst of the gigantic winds; comparatively you're small.
Yet, elegantly flying with a surge of courage for duty.
While others search, extraordinary uniforming crest.
And even bold striking forms of colors, I see your red or blue velvet,
or pearly white feathery vest.

I receive you as no mistaken Messenger
in the sky.
No doubt there is no such thing as flying too high.
Soothe Me.
Teach Me.
The true meanings and secrets in the sky.

Thursday, December 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,flying,sky
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 21 August 2018

I receive you as no mistaken Messenger in the sky. No doubt there is no such thing as flying too high. Soothe Me. Teach Me. The true meanings and secrets in the sky........... touching and impressive lines so nicely painted. it is a beautiful poem with nice theme.10

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Chinedu Dike 25 February 2018

Fine and lofty verse - a free flight of creativity energized by passion. A beautiful creation Bree. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 December 2017

While others trample over your hidden secrets. I am determined to find your sequence. teach me the true secrets of the sky. a vision, a desire.. imagination.. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Rajnish Manga 26 December 2017

The poem shows the appreciation for reality as well as quest for knowledge. Thanks for sharing.

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Sona Wilae 14 December 2017

This is beautiful! I really love the imagery.

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Bree Z Love

Bree Z Love

Chicago, Illinois
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