Succes My World Poem by Fiefa Bruce

Succes My World

Rating: 4.3


When I think success
I see it comes
When i dream success
I see it comes
When i touch success
It fates away
Success success
My hope

I'll find success
Embrace success
When i hold success
I'll keep it save
When I have success
I'll share it
Success success
My world

I'll rule
Yes, I'll influence
Thought, Oh thought
My Success Success
I'll keep,
I see
Success a life
Success my hope
Success my world

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arthur Tugman 05 November 2011

Money can't buy success, but the lack of it can cause failure. - Arthur Tugman

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Sameer Ahmed 10 June 2009

A very pragmatic approach displayed in this poem which is well-lit with an inspirational message in its essence. If one is stays focused on any objective he or she is destined to, success knocks the door with a repute......10

19 18 Reply

good poem and having relevance in daily life.

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Soumita Sarkar 13 January 2014

Good poem....very relevant.....I invite you to read and rate my poems.Thanks.

5 1 Reply
Soe Myataung 11 November 2012

Success my hope Success my world I like best that word.

25 7 Reply
Arthur Tugman 28 November 2011

Success succeeds expectations, failure exceeds predictions - Arthur Tugman

23 21 Reply
Arthur Tugman 28 November 2011

Success succeeds expectations, failure exceeds predictions - Arthur Tugman

23 19 Reply
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