Such A Strong Word Comments

Katelynn, this is a true poem. However, the phrase 'you're tense when you're around them' doesn't strike a bell with me. I feel relaxed when with a loved one. I also disagree with the other comment, below, which states that love is difficult to hold on to. Not necessaily - TRUE love has a way of keeping a tight grip! Love, Fran xx ps, Some of your spellings are a little unusual!

Katelynne Love is in the mind but like the body needs sustinence and care.It comes and goes but is like quicksilver in the hands.difficult to hold on to. Nive write, Sid John