Suffered The Worst Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Suffered The Worst

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Suffered the worst

Everything has worked against
I have suffered the worst
for the self and relation
it is not worth to mention

we couldn't reconcile
and file
our own emotions
in true perspectives

he was drifting away
and was not willing to stay
together and make it heaven
but everything was vapored and gone

we had no differences
and gave every chance
to live up to an expectations
and improve upon the relation

it looks it as a nightmare
it may lead nowhere
the distance shall increase further
thereby increasing the fear

I shall stand alone
and resolve is shown
with no compromise on my stand
I shall prefer its end soon

Hasmukh Mehta

Suffered The Worst
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chima Ononogbu 15 October 2019

A sharp and poetic description of a relationship drifting apart. Nice poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 October 2019

Beautiful verse Hasmukh Mehta ji! The pain one goes through during the drifting apart of relations especially the closest ones is so beautifully described in the poem! Giti Tyagi, Patiala, Oct 14,2019

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 October 2019

Well written Sir Gargi Saha, Varanasi, Oct 14,2019

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 October 2019

Can relate with the verse. It is one's integrity that sails one through all storms and gales. A fine composition. TFS. Annapurna Sharma, Nellore, Oct 14,2019

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 October 2019

I shall stand alone and resolve is shown with no compromise on my stand I shall prefer its end soon Hasmukh Mehta .poemhunter

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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