Suicide Poem by Carissa McBride

Suicide

Rating: 4.0


please let me die
im so tired.
i hate it here
i want to die.

he dosen't love me.
he loves noone.
he makes my heart cry.
i want to commit suicide,

but i can't decide how
a guns so messy.
but my wrist im used to.
i want to watch my blood spill on the floor.

as i feel the life leaving my body.
i feel the urge strenghtining
i now must say
goodbye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Singer 10 December 2008

very good it is a great poem by a great poet

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Suicide King 22 March 2008

A beautiful piece of poetry...simply beautiful.

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Tom Altenhofen 02 November 2007

WTF! ? ! Don't do it! You seriously better not. You are an amazing poet and while that probably doesn't matter much, I'm sure you can find happiness eventually. Life sucks, I feel the same. Don't do it! I'm here for you. I don't know you at all... but I'll listen any time you need somebody to talk to. *hug*

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