I wish I’d never met you
and developed all these feelings
of despair, loneliness but most of all…
love.
I never believed in love at first sight
till you showed me it was possible
but now as I sit here
thinking of you…
and those few who’d miss me
I fall deeper into black
Can’t we go back to that trip
where we met by chance
if only to see you again.
It probably seemed like I didn’t like you
that’s why I wouldn’t speak
the truth is I’d never been so in love
I didn’t want to say the wrong thing
So when we got back you added me as a friend
and instantly I made you think I was weird
I just don’t know what to do
well… I do… but… I’m scared of dying
and never know the way you feel
if anything at all
Hey everyone, this is Alex. This came straight from the heart, it is exactly how I’m feeling right now. Hope you like it!
I really like this writing, but I am genuinely confused by the mention of death in this poem. I just don't know and can't tell from the poem where it fits. It doesn't really make any sense to me. There is a complete disconnect between the message of the poem and death. GW62
Ummm... Somebody posted this comment: 'wow.. I like it... its amazing..I hope that girl that you fell in Love feels the same way. Plz look up mine and if you want to you can comment. :) see you around' The problem is it was for some reason deleted (I only know about it from my email inbox) . I don't know who this was and I really would like to read your poems whoever you are so if you are reading this please post your name. By the way thanks for the positive comments guys and for the record I'm feeling a lot better now. What a difference a day makes, eh? Thanks Alex
You should tell her how you feel. :) She might feel the same way as you do. And i like it how you write it. Plz see my poems and if ya want you can comment. its on Rosie Ann Peterson
Hi Alex. We don't know each other, but that was a powerful piece of writing. Shame that you feel that way. I write mostly comedy. Look me up some time for a cheer up. Most of my stuff is whimsical nonsense. Steve
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hmm I'm starting to get this vibe that this has truelly happen before (not the suicide) but the love lost and the heart ache and pain