Chase Breeden

Rookie (6/2/1992 / Tennessee)

Suicide Note - Poem by Chase Breeden

The best of me is gone
A little piece in all of you
Now we've reached the time
Where I must bid you all adieu
I've fought my battles
And lost my war
I've been beaten down
To only my core
My heart has imploded
My strength severed now
My mind has exploded
And I'm on my way down
This time I'm ready
This time I'll go 
I'm to the point now
Of my all time low
I've tried to be patient
I've waited in line
But I keep getting lied to
I'll never be fine
Forget all your 'love'
And remember this hate
Forget all you've promised
It won't be okay
I'll sure miss you all
Well, I'll give it a try
But until the day you all die
I must bid you goodbye 


Comments about Suicide Note by Chase Breeden

  • (5/1/2010 1:19:00 PM)


    okay so this is a wonderful poem. i absolutly love it. you should message me. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/1/2010 11:44:00 AM)


    wow...this is honestly amazing. swelling full of emotion with each word and it feels like every line has a little more bite to it than the one before. bravo. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 1, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 1, 2010


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