Thursday, May 17, 2007

Suit Of Kisses Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the dark
kiss after kiss

flutters between
my shoulder blades
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Dónall Dempsey
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Scarlett Treat 08 December 2007

I love the part about walking about naked, refusing to take a shower cause it would wash away the lovely 'suit of kisses....fluttering between your shoulder blades.' As Gina said, you have the most awesome power to take the simplest things in your life, like a fluttery, butterfly kiss, and turn it int the most beautiful love poems I have ever read. Each and every one is special in its own way, just as SUIT OF KISSES is. A true double dip of DonallDonall.

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Gina Pisapia 06 August 2007

Your haiku are something else...that always surprise me in their wonderful gathering of the ordinary and presenting it in a truly extradinary way. This made me laugh and think 'Ahhh! ' What you do with the oridnary little moments that others just throw away is beautiful beyond belief and I just love the way you open up the world for me...making me recognise the event but see it is such a new way. I write haiku myself but I just adore what you do with them! They're a joy! GinaXX

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alice sunderland 18 May 2007

aahhh guinness - cause of my current 'predicament'. a guinness haiku donall! youll do for me bonny lad. al

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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