In the dark
kiss after kiss
flutters between
my shoulder blades
...
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Your haiku are something else...that always surprise me in their wonderful gathering of the ordinary and presenting it in a truly extradinary way. This made me laugh and think 'Ahhh! ' What you do with the oridnary little moments that others just throw away is beautiful beyond belief and I just love the way you open up the world for me...making me recognise the event but see it is such a new way. I write haiku myself but I just adore what you do with them! They're a joy! GinaXX
aahhh guinness - cause of my current 'predicament'. a guinness haiku donall! youll do for me bonny lad. al
I love the part about walking about naked, refusing to take a shower cause it would wash away the lovely 'suit of kisses....fluttering between your shoulder blades.' As Gina said, you have the most awesome power to take the simplest things in your life, like a fluttery, butterfly kiss, and turn it int the most beautiful love poems I have ever read. Each and every one is special in its own way, just as SUIT OF KISSES is. A true double dip of DonallDonall.