Monday, August 10, 2009

Summer Melt Down Comments

Rating: 4.5

Ice cream cones and a leisurely walk
Shadowed by a building with a clock
Summer heat melts flavor as we talk
Muggy steam created a vanilla flow…
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Theresa Ann Moore
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Ben Gieske 10 August 2009

You have created a nice picture with interesting rhymes that do not distract but add interest and your have successfully concentrated the picture to this one scene in space and time.

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Nikunj Sharma 10 August 2009

melting down her elbow the white stream does glow soggy tissue paper, cant help anymore passerbys also not sure being a dad you cant help smile moment of joy, life in a while

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Theresa Ann Moore

Theresa Ann Moore

Michigan, U.S.A.
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