Wednesday, April 12, 2017

Summer Rain Comments

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One of life's simplest moments: the approaching of the first few drops of a summer rain. That it was coming, all along, and had been predicted since mid-morning, by neighbors pointing to the dark western sky, and by the agitation of robins, and the unusual silence of cicadas - all that was conceded, and understood, while the rain itself would be welcomed, for it would cool the trees and the houses and the grass, and nourish the creatures of the earth in its invisible and lasting way.

Certainly it was expected, and yet as I sat there reading, being drawn into a faraway world, I had entirely forgotten the roof and the porch, and the parched streets, and even the increased tempo of the wind blowing through the trees - and suddenly there it was, that sound, those drops scattering, nothing overwhelming, just the announcement, the presence, of rain come at last.
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Jazib Kamalvi 13 April 2017

Wonderful rhythm of rain in prose. Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 12 April 2017

It is a wonderful portrayal. It has everything- nature, history and sweet memories. Thanks for sharing: 'predicted.. by neighbors. and by the agitation of robins, and the unusual silence of cicadas.. The notes and the drops of rain made a music'.

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