Wednesday, October 28, 2015

Sun Blessed Sky Comments

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Sun blessed sky, let know one cry
Float in a wooden boat
Let know one pass by
Without just one overwhelming tear
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Mark Heathcote
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Shakil Ahmed 28 October 2015

repetition of the line has added the poetic beauty of the poem, i enjoyed reading the poem, thanks for sharing, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments.

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