Sun Poisoning Poem by Axley Jade Blaze

Sun Poisoning

Rating: 5.0


She was only ever all flame, fire
He was her red-phosphorus MATCH
In this August opera.

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Sun Poisoning
Sunday, August 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,passion,relationships
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Author's Annotation(s) : While slated 'haiku' the poem does not abide to the 5-7-5 syllable structure, as it was originally designed as an opener to NARCOTARY: Chemical Warfare (a literary fictional memoir) , before being released with any|all additional poetry collections.VThe American Haiku is not exactly the Japanese Haiku. The Japanese Haiku is strictly disciplined to seventeen syllables but since the language structure is different I don't think American Haiku's (short three-line poems intended to be completely packed with Void of Whole) should worry about syllables because American speech is something again...bursting to pop. Above all, a Haiku must be very simple and free of all poetic trickery and make a little picture and yet be as airy and graceful as a Vivaldi Pastorella. Jack KerouacAuthor
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 06 August 2018

Such a fine haiku, Nicole👍👍👍

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