Wednesday, August 18, 2021

Sun Sonnet Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun is ruler of our earthly realm.
O'er solar planets it maintains its reign,
each morning taking luminescent helm
for daily doings in our world's terrain.
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Harley White
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M Asim Nehal 19 August 2021

Full Stars.****

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M Asim Nehal 19 August 2021

Amusing poem. I liked the flow and some phrases: where life might well have blossomed in their clime upon an evolutionary road.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 August 2021

a brilliant poem on something that gives hope Bravo!

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Robert Murray Smith 18 August 2021

Without the sun we are done. A poem that stands out.

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