DAVID GERARDINO

Rookie (9/19/1963)

Sunday Clouths - Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

PRAISE the safe melody,
plow thrue its beatiful
chords, dance to its
rythem, let the lovers
find their laughter,
and stars.
PRAISE the safe melody,
fill your mansions with
love, hold on to the abtract,
and let your eyes find the
mark.


Comments about Sunday Clouths by DAVID GERARDINO

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/10/2006 3:42:00 PM)


    DAVID...NICE TIGHT & CRISP WRITE...smooth flux from opening to close.
    I'VE READ SEVERAL OF YOUR WORKS...YOU'VE GOT THE GIFT.

    ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R..~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
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  • (5/10/2006 1:49:00 PM)


    I really enjoyed the way that this one was set out and you have a clever use of language contained, Love duncan (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 10, 2006



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