Wednesday, August 11, 2021

[ Sunshine ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is unpredictable
And it can be a heavy one
Beat you up into a pulp
And not even be remotely done
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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 August 2021

The picture added is a soft shaded picture from the ancient past, no? Really touching but frightening though. I have enjoyed very much! Thank you for having created this!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 August 2021

YOU wrote: ' a freedom dreamer. in it for adventure. enamored by liberty. transcending in love.' All adorable outings I so loved, not only a FREEDOM dreamer, but you are a careful POET, a best Songwriter and this lovely poem sings so melodious.5 Stars full on Top!

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Chinedu Dike 11 August 2021

Really a beautiful love poem written with clarity of thought and mind. An insightful piece of poetry....

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