Tuesday, April 24, 2007

Sur'Re'Al Comments

Rating: 5.0

Creamy coloured bubbles
Of silky luminescence
Oft without any effervescence
Trickled running until pouring
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David Taylor
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Marci Made 24 April 2007

I love this, it's making me laugh out loud. Do you like Frosted Flakes? Or maybe Fruit Loops, now those are good. This poem is as sweet as you are, through your poems. mm.xo

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As Helen said... and funny, too. A sweet read. t x

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Original Unknown Girl 24 April 2007

David, you take the ordinary and change it into the extra-ordinary! I love this, was thinking about bubbles only today in a poetic way and you've beaten me to it! Though this little piece of surrealism is so sweet I couldn't possibly compete.. HG: -) xx

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