Surge Of Pain Tanka Poem by Chen-ou Liu

Surge Of Pain Tanka

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a placard that reads
"take my hand not my life"
in the moonlight
hand on her belly
she feels a surge of pain

Friday, November 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,life and death,moon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 17 November 2017

Feeling a surge of pain is thought provoking, . We need calmness of moon to cure us. A brilliant perceptional poem this is...10

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