winter dawn
a butterfly wakes up
in my dream
one of selected haiku
Simply Haiku's 'TOP TEN LIST' of the World's Finest Living English language Haiku Poets for the Year 2011 (Simply Haiku,9: 3,4, Autumn/Winter 2011)
http: //simplyhaiku.theartofhaiku.com/autumnwinter-2011/simply-haiku.html
.............very nice a butterfly is like a dream....they are only here for a short time...
So pretty! I've been trying so hard to understand true haiku because all I learned when I was younger was that it was 5 syllables,7 syllables,5 syllables. But a few months ago I learned that that wasn't the case, and this seems like an excellent example of true haiku. Thank you for sharing! Hopefully I will be able to write them now, because this form is very appealing to me. I like that it's a form that is so little, but can say so much.
With the dawn of a cool setting, one gets in to a colorful world, in a dream though. Wow! Beautifully crafted with tremendous profundity. How you choose and manage words, it's amazing. Full marks Liu. Thanks for sharing
Butterfly's round of transmigration breaks the chrysalis of a dream
winter dawn a butterfly wakes up in my dream waking and flying butterfly of your dreams so imaginative and poetic dear poet. tony
first lovely night... softest one see my silhouette I can also see daily at night under shades of moon bright see me tonight happy you will be coldest wintry snowy dawning my sleepy earth fly rises as I fall wet and scream now a broken creamy dream
WHY DON'T U THANK UR READERS O GREAT HAIKUIST A GREAT HUMAN QUALITY MISSING ON PH MOSTLY HENCE '''sometimes flow of appreciation also inspires the new to ignite fighting spirit. PH could accept that challenge also..... to hold, to increase their self-assurance.'''' A GOOD COMMENT BEING SHARED HERE PLEASE READ THOSE WHO READ URS AND COMMENT ON THEIRS TOO
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a dreamy kind of haiku with butterfly. NICE