Surprise Suprise Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Surprise Suprise

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If you think that
I am maimed -
suprise, suprise.

My heart has claimed
its own award.
The broken segments
of its hurts
rejoined unconsiously
without thought
of damage won
by loves destruction.

Suprise, suprise.
Here comes the sun.

Sally Plumb

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 08 July 2013

A strong heart with damage won to mend, , , love the shout at the end Surprise, suprise. Here comes the sun. You sure can write them out of the hat! regards

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Sally P. P. 24 February 2019

I was glad to read your reads.mush appreciated.I wish you luck.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 May 2010

Very very pleasant dear Sally. it is really nice. broken pieces of heart. joined unconsciously. i shall never be maimed. i will live through all pain. thank you..

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Sally P. P. 08 September 2019

Thankyou for your kind comment.Appreciated at this tender time. Sally

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best poem i read today.... great meaning.

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Sally 18 November 2019

Thankyou for your lovely remark.

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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