Sally Plumb Plumb

Gold Star - 9,439 Points (23 9 1940 / Haverhill Suffolk England)

Surprise Suprise - Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

If you think that
I am maimed -
suprise, suprise.

My heart has claimed
its own award.
The broken segments
of its hurts
rejoined unconsiously
without thought
of damage won
by loves destruction.

Suprise, suprise.
Here comes the sun.

Sally Plumb


Comments about Surprise Suprise by Sally Plumb Plumb

  • Ken E Hall (7/8/2013 2:30:00 AM)

    A strong heart with damage won to mend, , , love the shout at the end Surprise, suprise.
    Here comes the sun. You sure can write them out of the hat! regards
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    Sally P. P.(2/24/2019 1:54:00 AM)

    I was glad to read your reads.mush appreciated.I wish you luck.

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (5/23/2010 1:29:00 PM)

    Very very pleasant dear Sally. it is really nice. broken pieces of heart.
    joined unconsciously. i shall never be maimed. i will live through all pain.
    thank you..
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    Sally P. P.(9/8/2019 2:41:00 AM)

    Thankyou for your kind comment.Appreciated at this tender time. Sally

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (3/28/2009 1:49:00 AM)

    best poem i read today.... great meaning. (Report)Reply

    Sally(11/18/2019 3:56:00 AM)

    Thankyou for your lovely remark.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 14, 2009



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