When I missed you
on a fateful day,
and my mental sustenance
was drained with misery,
I cursed the late fall sun
and cried - let darkness come.
Spin rotund flare
until you are a cinder
and winter befalls
the universe
with colder stars
and older lights,
then night will reign
for eternity across
forevers sights.
- and me an ancient lady
in timelessness unfree
will wander the spatial deserts
into infinity.
Wow! What a power! " the universe with colder stars and older lights, then night will reign for eternity across forevers sights. - and me an ancient lady in timelessness unfree will wander the spatial deserts"
a haunting poem of what might have been? instead the wish of darkness can now be seen! ............wonderfully written.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful poem, needing only a comma after the word SPIN on line seven and an apostrophe in the word FOREVER'S in line fifteen. Well done, and congratulations on having it selected as Poem of the Day!