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Infinity

Rating: 4.9
When I missed you
on a fateful day,
and my mental sustenance
was drained with misery,
I cursed the late fall sun
and cried - let darkness come.

Spin rotund flare
until you are a cinder
and winter befalls
the universe
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COMMENTS
S. Wesley Mcgranor 14 February 2021
'Awesome...
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Sally P P 09 April 2021
Thankyou you very much indeed
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Tom Allport 18 April 2017
a haunting poem of what might have been? instead the wish of darkness can now be seen! ............wonderfully written.
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Sally P. P. 02 April 2019
Thankyou for your comment and interest. Sally.
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Edward Kofi Louis 26 December 2015
The spatial deserts of life. Nice work.
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Sally PP 29 April 2019
Nice to hear from you. Thanks.
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Mary Mc Creath 24 September 2015
You shared a moment of pain and lonliness felt deeply. I was moved by your words.
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Sally P. P. 19 July 2019
Many thanks for your comment. My best wishes to you. Sally
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Madathil Rajendran Nair 19 February 2015
Beautifully woven mystic words. Lovely poem. (10)
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Sally P. P. 25 October 2019
Thankyou for your very kind remark. Sally
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 February 2015
and me an ancient lady in timelessness unfree will wander the spatial deserts into infinity. thank you
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Sally P. P. 16 September 2019
Thankyou for reading my stuff. Much appreciated.
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Godfrey Morris 19 February 2015
An awesome poem. Like the imagery protrayed
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SallyP. P. 27 October 2019
Your comment is much appreciated. Thankyou.
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Godfrey Morris 19 February 2015
An awesome poem. Like the imagery protested
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Sally P. P. 28 October 2019
Cheers, Godfrey, your generous thought is appreciated.
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Brian Stafford 19 February 2015
very good, you got it plumb right!
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SallyP. P. 29 October 2019
Cheers Brian.. Tanks for being interested.. sally
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Kim Barney 19 February 2015
Wonderful poem, needing only a comma after the word SPIN on line seven and an apostrophe in the word FOREVER'S in line fifteen. Well done, and congratulations on having it selected as Poem of the Day!
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Sally P. P. 30 October 2019
Hi! Kim. Thanks fo pointing out the comma bit. I’ll correct it when I can. All the best to you.e
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Sally P. P. 31 October 2019
Thankyou for your critique.I shall adjust. Cheers!
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