Tuesday, November 6, 2007

Surrender Comments

Rating: 5.0

At sunset,
Before a linen-draped altar,
Save for your fear,
She’d have pledged her troth
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Susan Marie Watkins
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Thad Wilk 06 November 2007

Hi Susan! Another splendid poem you've written ! ! (10) ! ! Thad

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The contrast of rich abundance, atmosphere and vivacity with that of loss and the overtones of death is cleverly stark. A finely scribed piece. t x

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Susan Marie Watkins

Susan Marie Watkins

California, USA
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