Surrender Poem by Rachel Adams

Surrender



In the hour of my retreat
My mind gives way to memories
Forcing your smile onto me
Forcing your passions to flow freely
Forcing my captured heart to flee

In the hour of my despair
My mind churns away at memories
I resist your smile my lover
I resist your passions over and over
I resist my heart and take cover

In the hour of my surrender
My mind thrives on memories
I long for your smile my lovely
I long for your warmth so desperately
I long for your love in eternity

In the hour of my hope
My mind plays tricks on me
You retreat from other women
You despair as your heart is frozen
You surrender to love me once again

In the hour of my surrender
Won't you wait for me forever?

Saturday, June 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 14 June 2014

Jeez, those turbulent and crazy emotions that memories of love and past loved ones can churn up! Nice poem written from all those tumbling thoughts that juggle our minds!

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