Friday, November 13, 2015

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I won't pretend that I don't care because I care beyond belief
I won't pretend that I'm okay because I'm lost amidst the grief,
I won't pretend it's easy because it's hard to be alive,
I won't pretend it doesn't hurt...but you know what? ...I'll survive!
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Angela McCrimmon
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Souren Mondal 14 November 2015

You fuse multiple emotions in your poem and finally end it on a strong note 'I'll survive' - something runs as a refrain throughout the poem.. A very well written poem Angela.. Thank you...

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 November 2015

To be true to one's own self is a great achievement. It gives respite from many a woos and saves one from a number of blues. Wonderful poem. enjoyed reading.Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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