Mason Maestro

Veteran Poet - 1,122 Points

Suspended (Original Version) - Poem by Mason Maestro

Trap pit, trap pit
Hung, limp, splint, trapped
My leg has grown numb in this desolate pit
Beasts linger and snarl up above
Waiting to pounce on my flesh bit-by-bit
Suspended in this pit where I sit

Lie down you mindless worker
It's too late
You followed your friends from start
Shallow minded worker
Suspended over a flaming pit
Burns the unripe

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This version of Suspended is the original written for the conceptual novelty - Single File Line. There were two other version written about North korea as a 'backward rogue nation' which are all available in the Special Edition of the novelty.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 25, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 7, 2012
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