Sweet Fear Poem by Arwen Lee CW

Sweet Fear

Rating: 5.0


Stars are blinking

Moon is smiling

Soft breeze comes in

A tender touch on my chin

We share the same night view

Everything I see resembles only you

Tenderness starts occupy my heart

Affectionateness strikes me like a dart

Trapped deeply in such an emotion

Too weak to fight the infatuation

I am truly afraid to admit it

That you could lift or ruin my spirit....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 21 October 2008

good poem on love feelings...the phrase 'like a dart' reads good...goes very well with the title...dart of 'affectionateness'...hence sweet...lifts the spirit...on loosing affection, may also ruin it...hence fear...10

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Arwen Lee CW

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Kuantan, Malaysia
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