Alone standing at the land of painTaste the bitterness of fallen rainIf all my efforts have lost in vainNo more feeling shall be poured again
short but powerful..
Wonderfully done. 'Tis not in vain if such feeling spills from you pen...the contrary, it creates this incredible poet for the rest of us to enjoy.
But its passes
Tough you heart lashes
Droughted eyes filled with pain
Even if your heart is as hard as stone
Just know you are never alone
This moment will bring some experience. Your heart seems strong and clear. The swan will leave the ducks.
More than 10 marks for you. Do not bother for comments good bad or bitter. Just keep on composing. Thats how you keep on writing.
good imagery on pain and tears in just four lines...wonderful piece...i liked very much...this is all what poem writing is about...a ten for you, Arwen Lee...
Depict the frightening situations... and charge the mind again... standing among the problems is one of the most difficult but beneficial thing. Short but Great.!
nice rythm.pain is indeed a jealous friend once it falls in step with one noone else is allowed to befriend that person.
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