Arwen Lee CW

Alone

Alone standing at the land of pain

Taste the bitterness of fallen rain

If all my efforts have lost in vain

No more feeling shall be poured again

Poem Submitted: Monday, September 22, 2008

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  • Sonya Florentino (2/23/2009 9:26:00 PM)

    short but powerful..

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  • Ridge Cahill (11/19/2008 5:17:00 AM)

    Wonderfully done. 'Tis not in vain if such feeling spills from you pen...the contrary, it creates this incredible poet for the rest of us to enjoy.

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  • who cares (10/12/2008 1:08:00 AM)

    But its passes
    Tough you heart lashes
    Out
    Droughted eyes filled with pain
    Still maintain
    Even if your heart is as hard as stone
    Just know you are never alone

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  • Luis Gil (10/5/2008 6:22:00 AM)

    This moment will bring some experience. Your heart seems strong and clear. The swan will leave the ducks.

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  • Ershad MazumderErshad Mazumder (9/25/2008 10:04:00 AM)

    More than 10 marks for you. Do not bother for comments good bad or bitter. Just keep on composing. Thats how you keep on writing.

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (9/25/2008 2:56:00 AM)

    good imagery on pain and tears in just four lines...wonderful piece...i liked very much...this is all what poem writing is about...a ten for you, Arwen Lee...

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  • James Mond (9/24/2008 8:33:00 AM)

    Depict the frightening situations... and charge the mind again... standing among the problems is one of the most difficult but beneficial thing. Short but Great.!

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  • Dr.Wardha Jawdat (9/22/2008 12:25:00 PM)

    nice rythm.pain is indeed a jealous friend once it falls in step with one noone else is allowed to befriend that person.

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