Alone Poem by Arwen Lee CW


Rating: 2.9

Alone standing at the land of pain

Taste the bitterness of fallen rain

If all my efforts have lost in vain

No more feeling shall be poured again

James Mond 24 September 2008

Depict the frightening situations... and charge the mind again... standing among the problems is one of the most difficult but beneficial thing. Short but Great.!

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 22 September 2008

nice rythm.pain is indeed a jealous friend once it falls in step with one noone else is allowed to befriend that person.

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Sonya Florentino 23 February 2009

short but powerful..

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Ridge Cahill 19 November 2008

Wonderfully done. 'Tis not in vain if such feeling spills from you pen...the contrary, it creates this incredible poet for the rest of us to enjoy.

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Luis Gil 05 October 2008

This moment will bring some experience. Your heart seems strong and clear. The swan will leave the ducks.

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Ershad Mazumder 25 September 2008

More than 10 marks for you. Do not bother for comments good bad or bitter. Just keep on composing. Thats how you keep on writing.

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Kesav Easwaran 25 September 2008

good imagery on pain and tears in just four lines...wonderful piece...i liked very much...this is all what poem writing is about...a ten for you, Arwen Lee...

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Arwen Lee CW

Arwen Lee CW

Kuantan, Malaysia
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