Alone Poem by Arwen Lee CW - Poem Hunter
Alone
Poem by Arwen Lee CW
Alone standing at the land of pain
Taste the bitterness of fallen rain
If all my efforts have lost in vain
No more feeling shall be poured again
Poem Submitted: Monday, September 22, 2008
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short but powerful..
Report ReplyWonderfully done. 'Tis not in vain if such feeling spills from you pen...the contrary, it creates this incredible poet for the rest of us to enjoy.
Report ReplyBut its passes
Report ReplyTough you heart lashes
Out
Droughted eyes filled with pain
Still maintain
Even if your heart is as hard as stone
Just know you are never alone
This moment will bring some experience. Your heart seems strong and clear. The swan will leave the ducks.
Report ReplyMore than 10 marks for you. Do not bother for comments good bad or bitter. Just keep on composing. Thats how you keep on writing.
Report Replygood imagery on pain and tears in just four lines...wonderful piece...i liked very much...this is all what poem writing is about...a ten for you, Arwen Lee...
Report ReplyDepict the frightening situations... and charge the mind again... standing among the problems is one of the most difficult but beneficial thing. Short but Great.!
Report Replynice rythm.pain is indeed a jealous friend once it falls in step with one noone else is allowed to befriend that person.
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