Arwen Lee CW

Arwen Lee CW (06-08-1983 / Kuantan, Malaysia)

Poems by Arwen Lee CW : 8 / 62

Alone - Poem by Arwen Lee CW

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Alone standing at the land of pain

Taste the bitterness of fallen rain

If all my efforts have lost in vain

No more feeling shall be poured again

Poems by Arwen Lee CW : 8 / 62

Sonya Florentino (2/23/2009 9:26:00 PM)
short but powerful.. (Report)Reply
Ridge Cahill (11/19/2008 5:17:00 AM)
Wonderfully done. 'Tis not in vain if such feeling spills from you pen...the contrary, it creates this incredible poet for the rest of us to enjoy. (Report)Reply
who cares (10/12/2008 1:08:00 AM)
But its passes
Tough you heart lashes
Out
Droughted eyes filled with pain
Still maintain
Even if your heart is as hard as stone
Just know you are never alone (Report)Reply
Luis Gil (10/5/2008 6:22:00 AM)
This moment will bring some experience. Your heart seems strong and clear. The swan will leave the ducks. (Report)Reply
Ershad Mazumder (9/25/2008 10:04:00 AM)
More than 10 marks for you. Do not bother for comments good bad or bitter. Just keep on composing. Thats how you keep on writing. (Report)Reply
Kesav Easwaran (9/25/2008 2:56:00 AM)
good imagery on pain and tears in just four lines...wonderful piece...i liked very much...this is all what poem writing is about...a ten for you, Arwen Lee... (Report)Reply
James Mond (9/24/2008 8:33:00 AM)
Depict the frightening situations... and charge the mind again... standing among the problems is one of the most difficult but beneficial thing. Short but Great.! (Report)Reply
Dr.Wardha Jawdat (9/22/2008 12:25:00 PM)
nice rythm.pain is indeed a jealous friend once it falls in step with one noone else is allowed to befriend that person. (Report)Reply