Sweet Feelings Poem by Dean McInerney

Sweet Feelings

Rating: 4.7


Come live with me and be my love,
And I shall thank the heavens above,
For they will have granted one wish to come true,
To be together, just me and you.

You make my life seem okay,
Your the person I turn to when I have a bad day.
You make bitter feelings taste like candy floss,
You make me feel better when I think of past loss.

Your face is so perfect,
Your eyes are so blue,
I smile and get goose bumps
When I think of you.

I hope this love will last forever,
And I hope that I will lose you never.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noel Mc Inerney 02 October 2009

i like it :) ur sooooo goood write more

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Allie Mccarter 02 October 2009

that is so good. i love it. =)

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Dean Mcinerney 02 October 2009

thanks people! I really appreciate the feedback

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Dean Mcinerney 13 October 2009

thanks so much people

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Sonia Hernandez 13 October 2009

Sweet dude! ;) Make others like this

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John Mcmanus 12 October 2009

I like this dean it's very sweet and tender, nicely done my friend.

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Eyan Desir 08 October 2009

Sweet poems I hope you keep this chick too 10s

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Dean Mcinerney 05 October 2009

Thank you soo much much appreciated

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