Oh life your so sweet
but you make me sweat
when you left
where would I seek?
Life that is so sweet
Life what did I miss?
for I am now a mess
Was it a waste to wish?
or should I continue to risk
But life you are so great
That i will not regret
for you are a gift
that i should keep.
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A lovely piece on the gift of life which carries with it ups and downs. Well articulated to capture the essence of the poem, bringing to light the poet's conviction about life. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.