Sweet Life Poem by Effie Zabala

Sweet Life

Rating: 4.5


Oh life your so sweet
but you make me sweat
when you left
where would I seek?
Life that is so sweet

Life what did I miss?
for I am now a mess
Was it a waste to wish?
or should I continue to risk

But life you are so great
That i will not regret
for you are a gift
that i should keep.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 01 November 2014

A lovely piece on the gift of life which carries with it ups and downs. Well articulated to capture the essence of the poem, bringing to light the poet's conviction about life. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Akanksha Bhatt 08 October 2012

really a very good poem! i liked it very much! please read my poems as well and dropp your comment! thank you

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